Mixing it up a little. Not all the work has to be serious, it can also be personal, anecdotal and humorous. I actually really like this image, I think it's strong.

Thinking about how these pieces all sit together as a series, I think it's important to have some shorter, one page pieces that can work as stand alone images. As the other 'let's talk about...' pages cover two or three sides, breaking up the rhetoric a little can make the longer passages more impactful, stops it just becoming a sea of writing.